Hey Khromies! This is looking promising, but all in all, it may require more information depending on what it is trying to be! No perspective issue due to it being so close, and the pose seems alright(?). I can't quite understand what is going on so far, and that makes it a little difficult to critique at all! Seems too raw and rough at the moment for any valid point besides "just work more on it". As it stands, seems as if someone is hugging her from behind, and she is looking to the side? Perhaps you could clarify the emotions in her face, if that is the case. Anyhow, the colors seem to be really nice. They are quite harmonic and fit together nicely, being almost complimentary colors. There is almost complete balance, however, you have a bit too many colors going on with that yellow.
Hope this helps!