Term 1 - Frog 🐸

Frog 2017-10-28 02:44:11 UTC #4

This exercise took me so long. I just want to get to the drawing part but hnnnnh

joosy 2017-10-28 07:34:20 UTC #5

Great work on the first assignments. You did very well with the colors. I like your image too! However, maybe I would have darkened the castle and bridge a bit at the top because your lightsource the burning boat would not reach the top or maybe introducing some artificial lighting or torches. Just my opinion though

AriaNotto 2017-10-28 08:19:57 UTC #6

Cool work

Frog 2017-10-28 15:17:43 UTC #7

Thank you

Frog 2017-10-28 23:08:42 UTC #8

thanks man, yeah i tried playing around with the lighting and stuff it just made everything look weird? maybe if i did add lights around the bridge could've made it convincing or something idk

zeption 2017-10-29 06:28:37 UTC #9

I love the image you made!!! Now I'm going to steal it!!!

although I can not stop feeling that something does not fit
but at the same time I'm not sure what it is

joosy 2017-10-29 15:30:26 UTC #10

I think first of all that there is no right or wrong and you got a great mood. Techniquely I think that you have a backlit situation which makes the house and bridge a silhuette. There is nothing that would act as ambient light fill or reflector which would iluminate the house from the front. So you only have the burning boat which is your second light source. But it would not reach the house. So what could work is to make the house very dark with a rim light and some torches. Just my 50 cent though

Frog 2017-10-30 01:31:52 UTC #11

pls no take an orange instead
haha tbh i think its my castle my dude.

Frog 2017-10-30 01:42:43 UTC #12

Ooo yeah that would've actually looked really cool dude!! Gotta keep that in mind next time.

Vadsomful 2017-10-31 19:20:27 UTC #14

Your boat image is really impressive! Everything blends so nicely, woah

Ardeey 2017-11-01 13:55:49 UTC #15

Hey Frog! I really like your latest two takes for the photoshop for production assignments. I like that you really went with a theme and a very nice atmosphere that fits that theme. The boat really pops out! As a critique what I'd say is to perhaps play a bit more with the image adjustments for the building so the overal picture gets a bit better of a read in terms of colors and value so it 'fits' better together as a whole. I hope that makes some sense, haha. I'm also pretty new at this =).. Anyway keep it up and looking forward to your future work!

Frog 2017-11-02 02:38:11 UTC #16

Heya!! First thank you yeah i was really having trouble with the building and stuff haaha. Gotta keep it in mind if we do anymore of this stuff it's hard but kinda fun in a way.

Frog 2017-11-02 02:38:34 UTC #17

Thanks my dude

Frog 2017-11-13 04:48:12 UTC #18

Hey guys sorry for the inactivity my laptop has been bugging out on me and I finally got it working again

Frog 2017-11-25 05:22:16 UTC #19

too many gestures my hand is tired

Ardeey 2017-11-25 12:54:26 UTC #20

These gestures are looking pretty good mate! You got the poses down pretty neatly and the 'read' is clear. Only thing I would advice you is to focus less on the contour of the legs and more to the flow of the limbs. These are gestures which means that when you do longer drawings later on, you will built anatomy on top of it anyway. By initially focusing on the flow, the form and anatomy you add on top will not be stiff. Hope that makes some sense. I would only really consider the form and anatomy with longer poses like maybe 3-5+ minutes if that makes sense! Anyway you've done a lot of gestures and I like how they look overal. Keep it coming ^_^

Frog 2017-11-28 00:22:29 UTC #21

Thanks my dude!! yeah i can see what you mean kinda feels like the leg are somehow the focal point, ill keep it in mind next time

Frog 2017-11-29 06:17:21 UTC #22

8 heads

fuulin 2017-11-29 15:39:59 UTC #23

Hey @Frog~ For your latest one good work following the instruction pretty closely and taking it further with some definition too! Everything seems right to me but the only thing that stood out for me is the lower legs seem a bit short? Perhaps the knees should be shifted slightly above the horizontal line? And the calves seem a bit on the fat side to me haha.

But overall great quality work, keep it up! Your 1 min gestures are great, I wish I can put in that much detail as you in 1 minute haha .

Frog 2017-11-29 19:49:01 UTC #24

heya @fuulin thanks yeah looking back at it the legs do seem stumpy lmao. Also on my gestures don't feel too put down i kinda cheated and took a couple more seconds to draw extra stuff.