I'm using these forums as a way, not only to get criticism, but also as a way to view my art as a thirdperson. IDK why, but I can't seem to see my errors until they get posted.
Notes:
POTD 16 is 3 days after POTF 15 as i sprained my shoulder @ the gym.
I can now better see my progress and mistakes.
I guess I should separate my work more, as in give each gesture more space on the page, and stop worrying about eating too many pages for now as its starting to get messy from my perspective.
For the last 6 Gestures on set G
I took a step back and tried to put down meaningful marks instead of rushing for time and i feel that made it better.
I need to make cleaner marks and stop making hairy, hesitant strokes^^
Maybe for Gestures like G1, i should draw through for the limb in the background and make it lighter instead of just erasing away the lines completely.
I feel like my POTD 8 is alot better than the ones after. I feel like i lost track of the study from thereon.
Are there other ways i should improve my drawings, like the what is the next step i should take. in terms of learning gesture.
Other Feedback is greatly appreciated too!